@akukes73 – Very beautifully played, Ash! I too, struggle with getting the roll strum clean each time. Probably why I don’t use it much 😅
I thought you played it extremely well. The only thing I might suggest is defining the trickier rhythms a little more clearly, like the first bar (which repeats) in the Bridge. Try clapping and counting that rhythm out loud while tapping your foot along to a click. That’s a great way to practice.
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