Hi Airam, I really like that Melody that you came up with, it’s beautiful 🙂 Now I do have some feedback on the classical piece, to me it’s hard to grasp a sense of the timing. It sounds like you are playing through the entire performance for the first time. So if I were you, I would work on this piece bar by bar and pay close attention to the timing. Check out this article on proper practice for some great tips in regards to learning songs.
And thanks so much for sharing your performances 🙂