Bravo! You have a great feel to your playing 🙂
There’s a couple things I’d suggest working on:
1) Try not to bend your fingers inwards at the first joint. For ex: 17 seconds into your performance with the ring finger. We always want to be curved at the first joint and fretting with the fingertip.
2) Your timing gets a little off on some of the harder bars. Follow these 3 steps and apply it to a couple bars at a time. Master the timing there and continue to tackle the rest in small sections.