Opinions on song Idea I just finished

[the_moon]

Hello, I hope this is the right forum. I’ve been a member for over a year now and my playing has improved quite a bit. I’d like to hear other peoples opinions on this song I just finished, I think I may want to polish it more

[robinboyd]

Wow, that’s awesome! I love it!

[lyndallk]

Wow. This is a beautiful piece. We’ll done. Lovely.

[lisadmh]

I love your song! It’s very smooth and meditative, then bam, it wakes you up. Great vibe. I’d play it for sure.

[rickeymike]

Great composition! It also has commercial appeal.

[cashmpe]

Very nice. Looks like you compiled a lot of knowledge in a years time and applied it well. Very cool.

[smokealot]

That was great!
My opinion is that you should write more songs 🙂 I would play it too.

[the_moon]

I’m glad so many people liked it! I have others I’ve been working on and I’ll be sure to post them when I can. I’ll also look into making tabs for those who are interested. Though I’ve never done them before and I have summer classes so it might be a while 😅

[lyndallk]

More please

[sir_anzalot]

Very cool, I like what you did here! Whenever I write something I only lay a foundation, but rarely do my songs reach this level of… let’s call it “storytelling” – Bravo! I can only second what rickeymike has already said. If I may offer some constructive criticism: Invest some of your polishing time into the transition between the strumming part and the following picking phrase. This is of course totally subjective, but that was the only part that felt a bit unfinished to me. Keep up your good work man, you got talent! 🙂

[necessaryrooster]

Would love to see the tabs for this to try and play it myself. This sounds pretty incredible.

[samash07]

Wow, that’s a lovely piece! And feels like it’d have commercial appeal as well.

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